I'm in "Wordsmith. Check it out on youngwriters.co.uk! If you don't get it. This is the poem that I won with!

Feelings
 
Luck is as green as grass , it smells like warm melting chocolate ,
streching its arms around the chosen few
 
Happiness is a rich velvet , it smells like toffe and marshmellows , melted
in a cup by the fire , its infectious , passing around as fast as the wind
 
Anger is as red as blood , it feels like crumpled snake skin , slithering
around the world with a heart of shattered glass
 
Comfort is as white as clean sheets , smelling like the richest roses int
he summer medows , it's as rare as diamonds , and we cherish it
 
Sadness is berry blue , tasting like waterery soup , it flows like heart
broken tears , and jumps upon you like a pouncing cat
 
Confusion is blue and red , spreading fast , as we feel it one by one ,
it's sticky taste , its rotten stench , and its silky texure., calling out like
stray cats.
 
Temptation is a smooth brown like chocolate , as hard as nails ,  calling
you in to its swirling pool , smelling of sweet syrup
 
Jealousy is orange , like the flames of dispare , only few experience it ,
its spicy taste , its firy burning as it takes you under
 
Hatred is black smoke , a thunderous cloud raining salty tears on the evil
and never touching the good
 
Smiles are golden , contagious and as warm as melting butter , they are
brave and lighten up any situation , for they have hearts of
silver.

Plus! I'm in the "Pen Pal" Feature! So you you can write a letter to "Oliver" to

Pen Pals
Wordsmith
Remus House
Coltsfoot Drive
Peterborough
PE2 9B5

And they will forward it on to me!!


Finally... you can email me!
Email [email protected]
And I will reply to ALL you!
As long as you are nice!




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